There is no step-by-step guide on what needs to be done to get the bad ending for both Catherine and Lucia, and also in the future for other characters, there are 2 endings, good and bad, but there should only be 1, like for each of the characters. 5 pioneers, or for others who may have come throughout the game, the boyfriend would only be there in the game to complement his role, or do hidden things with them, from the almost present boyfriend. Is the next update still coming out this year?
There will be more bad endings and for all the characters of course. There will be Futa on Male content in future updates, yes, if that's what you meant.
Next big release will not come this year, but I am already working something to not leave all of you hanging in this year.
Have you ever thought about doing something good instead of bad endings, like being with the futas, as you said that later on there will be futa x male in your game too, like the ones hidden in the boyfriend, both in the Chinese district and in the office, at the gym, in the archives, at the bank, he goes to do his work normally every day and in that case his girlfriend serves the CEOs, something like he's looking for his girlfriend and she's busy with them, and that's just an idea, and vice versa, like in that nightclub that catherine mentioned, could all of them at the same time, or 2 or 3, throughout the nightclub.
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This appeared the 3rd time I asked my girlfriend to talk to Lucia, I've already done all the necessary steps, but since then I can't tell her to talk to Lucia due to this error
I might have forgot to reupload the good version to itchio, please try the one on F95, those have this bug fixed already, while I will take care of the itchio file as well.
First question do you have a Patreon I can use to follow you?
Second thing I know you're still developing the game, but something I noticed while playing the latest version is that if the MC tells his GF "It's up to you" when talking about if she should talk to Catharine and Lucy she gets mad, but it doesn't change the outcome with Catharine. It's just a thought, but I think it would make for a compelling story if the player goes down this route that instead of the Futas trying to drive a wedge by making the MC out to be crazy they make her out to be. Kind of make it so the story starts going in the opposite direction, where she can't let it go and the main character is the one seeming to be okay with things. I know it's a big deviation, but I feel it would open up a lot of avenues that you could pursue like different ways to corrupt the GF and the main character. Personally I would like it to be possible for the main character to be able to be corrupted and taken by the Futa as well otherwise it kind of feels like a wasted opportunity to me. If not, then one of the Futas leading him astray like befriending him and going out to a night club without the GF, where he fucks around. I know the game is primarily about the GF being taken away, but it feels so one sided so far. Or even opening up the game to allow possible body transformation where the MC becomes a girl or sissification, making being brainwashed into a mindless slave only one of several possible endings for the MC.
Third it felt like I had to try and choose the worst options to encourage the GF to stray at points and the worst she got to was 75 I think, then it jumped back up to 95 shortly after so I basically got no where. This is where I think one of the Futas or Lin would make for a good "Friend" to the MC, someone that pretends to be your friend only to lie to your GF about what you said or do. If you do go down a MC corruption path where they fuck the MC as well or catch him drunk kissing someone, this "Friend" could take pictures and show the GF and so on.
Finally, my general thoughts are that I like it so far and I'm looking forward to seeing the rest of the game. My hope is that the game opens up a bit more in that the main character is able to be corrupted as well, as I feel like this will allow the game to flow in a more natural way and make for a more realistic and compelling story overall. In the end this is your game and up to you to decide what to do and what you're open to. I hope this comment gives you some ideas and you take this as fan just hoping to see more content. Take care.
Hello GreyHornet54! Thank you very much for trying my game and for giving me your opinion so thoroughly. I will try to go step by step to answer your points, hoping that I won't leave anything out.
I do not have a Patreon or a Subscribestar, I'm not delusional to think there is enough content inside the game just yet to monetize it. Later? Yes, surely, since I want this to become my livelihood (which aren't big dreams if you ask me, currently my 8 hours job earns me 900ish $) but as of now, I accept no payment from anyone, because I don't feel like I should even expect it, but thank you very much for thinking this way, I really appreciate it.
"Second thing I know you're still developing the game, but something I noticed while playing the latest version is that if the MC tells his GF "It's up to you" when talking about if she should talk to Catharine and Lucy she gets mad, but it doesn't change the outcome with Catharine" - Think of it like this: Both Catherine's and Lucy's bad ending need 3 points to achieve them. Whenever a choice appears to tell either Lucy or Catherine about what you or your GF saw, you earn one point towards that character. You can go 1-0, 0-1 or 1-1. To alter the scenes in between, while it was very much possible, not something I could focus on, I was happy I could put everything together to work as it should, because this was my first huge project. I will try to write scenes that differentiate even more throughout your choices in the future.
"Personally I would like it to be possible for the main character to be able to be corrupted and taken by the Futa as well otherwise it kind of feels like a wasted opportunity to me." - There are little signs, foreshadowing for this to happen in the current patch. No scenes, but a new character portrait at a certain scene, if you read everything carefully :-) To speak frankly, there are hints in this patch for Futa On Male content for the future.
"Third it felt like I had to try and choose the worst options to encourage the GF to stray at points and the worst she got to was 75 I think, then it jumped back up to 95 shortly after so I basically got no where." - Do not feel bad about this, right now there are no scenes tied to character relationships, but it will certainly need to be balanced, so one can raise or lower it to their heart's conent, right now, it was just another layer of test if it works well, changing some of the dialogues, for example.
To ALL of your ideas, thank you very much, I'd say a lot of them I already planned or in some form I planned and will be involved in the future updates. Once again, I appreciate you for sharing your opinion, thank you very much! :)
Hey bro is this game only about the mc gf getting taken by futa girls or is it also about the MC gf getting taken by actual guys? Cuz personally, i perfer the gf getting taken by actual guys to give it that more hard netorare feeling feel me?
This error was already hotfixed 1 day after the release of this update, I forgot to update the itch.io download. Amateur mistake on my end. As of now, there is no more content aside from one Adult scene with Miriam, so you are not missing out on much.
Fantastic work! Futa cuck with an actually properly big futa cock, plus quality models and some animations too. Can't wait for more. There's some buzz and discussion of the game on f95zone as well if you wanna check it out.
Regardless, excellent job, especially for a first game.
Nice start so far, Look forward to seeing where this goes after an update or two. Animation was decent for your first attempts as well.
While not all the time most good futa NTR games work better when the MC does not know about the girl(s) being futa for some amout of time but this is not for every case it just makes it easier to pull things like your girlfriend and a female friend going to a dressing room together to try on clothes only for her to have sex with the girlfriend while the MC is talking to her from outside the room. But I have seen games work where the MC knows about the futa early on as well just not as much so look forward to seeing what you do there.
Either way good luck with it all, will follow for now and if other social media sites or payment sub sites open up I will aim to join them as well in the future.
Thank you so much for your comment, this is exactly what I was looking forward to, some feedback first and foremost, admittedly some encouragement as well which I just received from all you wrote. I will not spoil the fun with that part, but I have all in my mind how I will execute the scenes regarding those points.
I added those into the tags, so I did not want to repeat in the text field, I'm very new to itch.io on the content creator side, so sorry about that. I will make sure to add it there as well.
Here are the kinks that are in the game as of now:
- Male Protagonist - Futanari\Dickgirl x Female - Male x Female - Netorare
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Hello Leonidas,
There is a step by step guide, you can find it on the game's discord channel. I will link it here as well for your convenience.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ZZfh5yvezR0q8WnYCplD5VvMzK4Tuq8Pxqc8GbrGoes/edit?usp=sharing
There will be more bad endings and for all the characters of course. There will be Futa on Male content in future updates, yes, if that's what you meant.
Next big release will not come this year, but I am already working something to not leave all of you hanging in this year.
- CandySH
Have you ever thought about doing something good instead of bad endings, like being with the futas, as you said that later on there will be futa x male in your game too, like the ones hidden in the boyfriend, both in the Chinese district and in the office, at the gym, in the archives, at the bank, he goes to do his work normally every day and in that case his girlfriend serves the CEOs, something like he's looking for his girlfriend and she's busy with them, and that's just an idea, and vice versa, like in that nightclub that catherine mentioned, could all of them at the same time, or 2 or 3, throughout the nightclub.
All I can say is be patient, I have a lot of ideas, still, in the game, including what you've mentioned here.
- CandySH
:) :):):):)
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File "livisland.rpyc", line 474, in script call
File "randomtopics.rpyc", line 3, in script call
File "ladyqijobs.rpyc", line 75, in script call
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This appeared the 3rd time I asked my girlfriend to talk to Lucia, I've already done all the necessary steps, but since then I can't tell her to talk to Lucia due to this error
Hello Leonidas,
I might have forgot to reupload the good version to itchio, please try the one on F95, those have this bug fixed already, while I will take care of the itchio file as well.
- CandySH
First question do you have a Patreon I can use to follow you?
Second thing I know you're still developing the game, but something I noticed while playing the latest version is that if the MC tells his GF "It's up to you" when talking about if she should talk to Catharine and Lucy she gets mad, but it doesn't change the outcome with Catharine. It's just a thought, but I think it would make for a compelling story if the player goes down this route that instead of the Futas trying to drive a wedge by making the MC out to be crazy they make her out to be. Kind of make it so the story starts going in the opposite direction, where she can't let it go and the main character is the one seeming to be okay with things. I know it's a big deviation, but I feel it would open up a lot of avenues that you could pursue like different ways to corrupt the GF and the main character. Personally I would like it to be possible for the main character to be able to be corrupted and taken by the Futa as well otherwise it kind of feels like a wasted opportunity to me. If not, then one of the Futas leading him astray like befriending him and going out to a night club without the GF, where he fucks around. I know the game is primarily about the GF being taken away, but it feels so one sided so far. Or even opening up the game to allow possible body transformation where the MC becomes a girl or sissification, making being brainwashed into a mindless slave only one of several possible endings for the MC.
Third it felt like I had to try and choose the worst options to encourage the GF to stray at points and the worst she got to was 75 I think, then it jumped back up to 95 shortly after so I basically got no where. This is where I think one of the Futas or Lin would make for a good "Friend" to the MC, someone that pretends to be your friend only to lie to your GF about what you said or do. If you do go down a MC corruption path where they fuck the MC as well or catch him drunk kissing someone, this "Friend" could take pictures and show the GF and so on.
Finally, my general thoughts are that I like it so far and I'm looking forward to seeing the rest of the game. My hope is that the game opens up a bit more in that the main character is able to be corrupted as well, as I feel like this will allow the game to flow in a more natural way and make for a more realistic and compelling story overall. In the end this is your game and up to you to decide what to do and what you're open to. I hope this comment gives you some ideas and you take this as fan just hoping to see more content. Take care.
Hello GreyHornet54!
Thank you very much for trying my game and for giving me your opinion so thoroughly.
I will try to go step by step to answer your points, hoping that I won't leave anything out.
I do not have a Patreon or a Subscribestar, I'm not delusional to think there is enough content inside the game just yet to monetize it. Later? Yes, surely, since I want this to become my livelihood (which aren't big dreams if you ask me, currently my 8 hours job earns me 900ish $) but as of now, I accept no payment from anyone, because I don't feel like I should even expect it, but thank you very much for thinking this way, I really appreciate it.
"Second thing I know you're still developing the game, but something I noticed while playing the latest version is that if the MC tells his GF "It's up to you" when talking about if she should talk to Catharine and Lucy she gets mad, but it doesn't change the outcome with Catharine" -
Think of it like this: Both Catherine's and Lucy's bad ending need 3 points to achieve them. Whenever a choice appears to tell either Lucy or Catherine about what you or your GF saw, you earn one point towards that character. You can go 1-0, 0-1 or 1-1. To alter the scenes in between, while it was very much possible, not something I could focus on, I was happy I could put everything together to work as it should, because this was my first huge project. I will try to write scenes that differentiate even more throughout your choices in the future.
"Personally I would like it to be possible for the main character to be able to be corrupted and taken by the Futa as well otherwise it kind of feels like a wasted opportunity to me." - There are little signs, foreshadowing for this to happen in the current patch. No scenes, but a new character portrait at a certain scene, if you read everything carefully :-) To speak frankly, there are hints in this patch for Futa On Male content for the future.
"Third it felt like I had to try and choose the worst options to encourage the GF to stray at points and the worst she got to was 75 I think, then it jumped back up to 95 shortly after so I basically got no where." - Do not feel bad about this, right now there are no scenes tied to character relationships, but it will certainly need to be balanced, so one can raise or lower it to their heart's conent, right now, it was just another layer of test if it works well, changing some of the dialogues, for example.
To ALL of your ideas, thank you very much, I'd say a lot of them I already planned or in some form I planned and will be involved in the future updates. Once again, I appreciate you for sharing your opinion, thank you very much! :)
- CandySH
Hey bro is this game only about the mc gf getting taken by futa girls or is it also about the MC gf getting taken by actual guys? Cuz personally, i perfer the gf getting taken by actual guys to give it that more hard netorare feeling feel me?
Hello dmar3,
Thanks for trying out the game. The GF will have adult scenes only with the MC and the Futanaris, no other males will be involved.
- CandySH
I'm getting an error when I go to the last pioneer Zhi after she messages. I won't be able to do that job.
Thank you for your feedback!
This error was already hotfixed 1 day after the release of this update, I forgot to update the itch.io download. Amateur mistake on my end. As of now, there is no more content aside from one Adult scene with Miriam, so you are not missing out on much.
- CandySH
If only the futa was the mc... sigh...
Hello!
Thank you for your comment.
Players won't be able to take the role of a Futa girl in this game. But it is planned for me to create a game with a Futa MC in the future.
- CandySH
Glad to hear it, I prefer not being the Futa.
Fantastic work!
Futa cuck with an actually properly big futa cock, plus quality models and some animations too.
Can't wait for more.
There's some buzz and discussion of the game on f95zone as well if you wanna check it out.
Regardless, excellent job, especially for a first game.
Nice start so far, Look forward to seeing where this goes after an update or two. Animation was decent for your first attempts as well.
While not all the time most good futa NTR games work better when the MC does not know about the girl(s) being futa for some amout of time but this is not for every case it just makes it easier to pull things like your girlfriend and a female friend going to a dressing room together to try on clothes only for her to have sex with the girlfriend while the MC is talking to her from outside the room.
But I have seen games work where the MC knows about the futa early on as well just not as much so look forward to seeing what you do there.
Either way good luck with it all, will follow for now and if other social media sites or payment sub sites open up I will aim to join them as well in the future.
Hello fisty,
Thank you so much for your comment, this is exactly what I was looking forward to, some feedback first and foremost, admittedly some encouragement as well which I just received from all you wrote. I will not spoil the fun with that part, but I have all in my mind how I will execute the scenes regarding those points.
I'll work towards the next update.
- CandySH
Hi can you give more info on the game? is it Female MC, Lesbian, etc.
Hello!
Thank you for the interest.
I added those into the tags, so I did not want to repeat in the text field, I'm very new to itch.io on the content creator side, so sorry about that. I will make sure to add it there as well.
Here are the kinks that are in the game as of now:
- Male Protagonist
- Futanari\Dickgirl x Female
- Male x Female
- Netorare